Friday, October 05, 2007

Vacuum


In a vacuum
sealed within
my soul leaks
my mind shatters

in a betrayal
of my own brain
I'm left to rot
dying by the wayside

3 comments:

Aqua said...

Polar Bear,
Your poem captures that intense sadness I have about the split I feel between the empty, sad, lost me and the me I believe I am when I have been well...that sense that we may never recover our minds and souls again...I hope both of us can. I wish that for you.

Suzanne said...

I just wanted to let you know that you're not alone...

MB said...

I'm speechless by your poem chick; its one I can relate to (and it seems I'm not the only one). As Suzanne said "you're not alone".